Thursday, June 15, 2006

Insearch Throughout


Often lost in time and space,
Travels journeys without guides,
Working hard to make the race,
Chasing dreams is day and night

Asking what is all this for,
Wanders and shoots without a bow,
Should I settle or go for more,
Should I stay or should I go

In the end it starts again,
Rewinding never ending,
Praying standing but still in the rain,
Time and change everlasting burning

Pushing hard through the pain
Instead thinking, is it in vain

5 Comments:

Blogger calvism said...

+ i'm lost in my own time and space

11:09 AM  
Blogger business voodoo said...

with the relativity of time and space, one can choose to 'chase dreams' or 'live dreams'

'working hard to make the race' ... beautiful description of the time and space when one is caught existing and dreaming rather than being alive in the dream.

good work ... always remember ... life is a choice ... the only difference is the perception of 'i am not living my dream' versus 'i am living in my dream in its building stages' ...

peace & harmony,
elaine
'freedom must be exercised to stay in shape!'

2:17 PM  
Anonymous Steven said...

B+
Keep it up.

2:55 PM  
Blogger pisconight said...

Nice try!! Keep trying...
;)

2:49 PM  
Anonymous jmejmejmejme said...

wow, so deep. ive just finished my finals dont want to read anything that will overwork my brains (not anymore anyways haha). blog something fun duude! hahaha
ill re-read ur piece wen my brain is functioning again (hopefully by the time next finals come up hahaa)

11:24 AM  

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